I was a pupil in Uru Mānuka and this blog is where I shared my learning.
I like your story. I like how you described how life in London is. I think that some of the sentences weren't needed as they seemed to repeat. Another thing you could do is go into more depth about who your kids are an your living conditions.
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I like your story. I like how you described how life in London is. I think that some of the sentences weren't needed as they seemed to repeat. Another thing you could do is go into more depth about who your kids are an your living conditions.
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